I received valuable feedback during the picture lock critique. The flashbacks were better received by the audience, but needs improvement through sound. I also need to push the color grading a bit to enhance the emotional charge behind Cameron's thoughts. One major part I need to fix and have been working on is the restaurant scene -specifically the transition from the beginning of the date and the latter end. As it was during the critique, it jumped around too much. The biggest part for me to work on is creating moments that allow the audience to breathe. Currently, I have cut down the film so much that there is not a lot of time for the audience to think and keep up with some parts. It was recommended that I put in more of Cameron working so the audience can see just how dedicated she is to her career, while allowing the audience to breathe.
Overall, the critique was much needed as I close in on the final cut of Ipseity. I am now putting focus on the sound and music for the film
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